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The Recurring Car Accident

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I woke up with a pounding headache. My fiance sat beside me, as I took in my surroundings.
"Oh my god! Jillians awake!" My fiancé, Melissa, screamed. Multiple doctors came in and checked me.
"Wha-What happened?" I managed to get out.
"You've been in a coma for months!" She explained, "You were hit by a car."
"Oh," I said. Memories flooded back and the pounding headache became worse. I had this weird sense this happened before. Oh well.
    After hours of assessments, I was admitted to go home. Me and Melissa got home and everything went back to normal. One day, my parents called and asked if we wanted to go to dinner. We both agreed, since my parents hadn't seen me since I was in a coma.
    "Oh, my goodness! I am so happy to see you. And you too Melissa. We are so happy to see you awake. We're sorry we weren't able to see you right away after you woke up, but were here now." My mom rambled on as my dad nodded his head in agreement. He doesn't really like the idea of Melissa being my fiancé. He said it was a disgrace to have a lesbian daughter.
"It's nice to see you, too, mom." Melissa said. My mom begged her to call her mom.
"Yeah, I'm very happy to see you guys." I said.
    "So, dears, when do you think the wedding will be? I was waiting forever for the wedding and then you went in a coma, but now that you're awake you can continue planning." Mom said with a huge smile.
Wedding? I don't remember me or Mel proposing.
    "Well, we're taking it pretty slow for now. We decided Jill should take it easy for a little bit until she gets herself together." Mellissa said with a small smile. She took my hand in hers and rubbed the engagement ring.
When did that get there?
We ate and chatted for a couple hours before it was time to go home.
The next few months things went normally. But then something strange happened.
I woke up and Mel wasn't beside me. I walked to the kitchen and saw a note.
'Dear Jill,

        I'm sorry I'm not there, but you know it's bad luck to see the bride on her wedding day. 

                                                                                                               I love you so much!
                                                                                                                                  Mel'

Wait! It's our wedding day!
I went to our bedroom and looked in the closet and what do ya know, a beautiful, gothic wedding dress.
After hours of preparing and people coming and going, I was ready to go.
    Me and my best friends, April and Sarah, walked out of my house on the way to Sarahs car. I was crossing the street when all of a sudden, my feet seemed stuck. I was trying to move when I saw a car coming right for me. The same car that hit me the last time.

I woke up with a pounding headache. My fiance sat beside me, as I took in my surroundings.
"Oh my god! Jillians awake!" My fiancé, Melissa, screamed. Multiple doctors came in and checked me.
"Wha-What happened?" I managed to get out.
"You've been in a coma for months!" She explained, "You were hit by a car."
"Oh," I said. Memories flooded back and the pounding headache became worse. I had this weird sense that this happened before. Oh well.
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AnonymousVulture's avatar
Man I could've saved you.  Still, this is another great creepy tale that I would hate to have happen to me.Hold me... I'm scared.